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Party Crasher

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Edit Yay, the link got fixed! WOO! This is 6 for 6 for me on EQD~! Thank you!

Edit Edit I drew Big Mac without the collar because I figured he wouldn't wear it when he was trying to relax on a date. (Hearts and Hooves Day doesn't count - he was on a love poison and wasn't himself)

Edit Edit Edit 15,000 views! Thanks everypony! 20,000 views! :iconfluttershyyayplz:

Poor Big Mac. Getting upstaged by a worm. You'll get used to it, buddy :heart:

In case you haven't noticed, I'm a bit of a Fluttermac shipper. So I thought I might as well draw something for the two. That and there isn't enough of this on deviantART ^.^

Now I'm not trying to start a shipping war here. So just accept this for the cuteness that it is, yeah?

Also, I actually used a vector background rather than trying to make my own for once.

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A call for help to the Brony Community!
I'm not only a brony, but an independent comic creator right here on deviantART. And I'm excited to say that my comic, :iconlongitudes-latitudes: will be going to its very first convention this year! However, being independent means being underfunded. If you could take some time to throw a bit or two my way, that would be very appreciated!

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Over-all, you did a spectacular job on this comic. You get a lot of brownie points from me because I have an unhealthy obsession with Fluttermac, therefore impact is at its height for me, but I'm still going to be picky on the vision of this.

A couple small things: first of all in the first and second strips, Fluttershy is posing a little awkwardly. I can't quite put my finger on what it is exactly, but it doesn't seem quite right. A good alternative would be to have her lying in a different position. Also, the wings are curved a little too much.

Fluttershy's nose from a side view actually curves when it meets the face rather than point inwards. The tip of her nose is a bit pointier as well.

One more thing: think of Fluttershy's eye like a regulat elliptical eye, only cut at the top for a more shy look. Yours looks a little too triangular.