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Submitted: September 22, 2012
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Party Crasherby *Tprinces

Fan Art / Cartoons & Comics / Digital / Movies & TV

Edit Yay, the link got fixed! WOO! This is 6 for 6 for me on EQD~! Thank you!

Edit Edit I drew Big Mac without the collar because I figured he wouldn't wear it when he was trying to relax on a date. (Hearts and Hooves Day doesn't count - he was on a love poison and wasn't himself)

Edit Edit Edit ~~15,000 views! Thanks everypony!~~ 20,000 views!

Poor Big Mac. Getting upstaged by a worm. You'll get used to it, buddy

In case you haven't noticed, I'm a bit of a Fluttermac shipper. So I thought I might as well draw something for the two. That and there isn't enough of this on deviantART ^.^

Now I'm not trying to start a shipping war here. So just accept this for the cuteness that it is, yeah?

Also, I actually used a vector background rather than trying to make my own for once.

Background:

A call for help to the Brony Community!
I'm not only a brony, but an independent comic creator right here on deviantART. And I'm excited to say that my comic,

will be going to its very first convention this year! However, being independent means being underfunded. If you could take some time to throw a bit or two my way, that would be very appreciated!

Chipin account => [link]

Critique by ~monky9997891 Sep 24, 2012, 11:57:00 AM

Over-all, you did a spectacular job on this comic. You get a lot of brownie points from me because I have an unhealthy obsession with Fluttermac, therefore impact is at its height for me, but I'm still going to be picky on the vision of this.

A couple small things: first of all in the first and second strips, Fluttershy is posing a little awkwardly. I can't quite put my finger on what it is exactly, but it doesn't seem quite right. A good alternative would be to have her lying in a different position. Also, the wings are curved a little too much.

Fluttershy's nose from a side view actually curves when it meets the face rather than point inwards. The tip of her nose is a bit pointier as well.

One more thing: think of Fluttershy's eye like a regulat elliptical eye, only cut at the top for a more shy look. Yours looks a little too triangular.

What do you think?

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